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Monday, January 18, 2010

Critique Request- Mylar, Children's Picture Book

TITLE:Mylar

WORD COUNT: 920

GENRE: Children's Picture Book

DESCRIPTION: Today is the best day of Mylar’s life. Today he is being taken home. Mylar, a fun-loving balloon, is finally given a warm home. Just as soon as he gets comfortable, he is swept away and loses his best friend, Jamie. This journey follows Mylar as he searches favorite children’s play spots, like the ballpark and playground, for his best friend, while battling Mother Nature and loss of hope. Despite feeling down and giving up, Mylar manages to find his friend and home, much to the help of the reader rooting aloud for him.

CRITIQUE REQUESTED: General feedback, everything, and/or anything

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