TITLE: All Because of You
WORD COUNT:87,000
GENRE: Thriller
DESCRIPTION: Please read full query here.
CRITIQUE REQUESTED: First chapter (26 pages), primarily looking for critique on the hook and introduction of protagonist and antagonist.
CONTACT INFO: www.nataschanichole.blogspot.com or by email: natascha@jaffa.name
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Critique Request- Killing Time on the Highway, Thriller
TITLE: Killing Time on the Highway
WORDCOUNT: 69,000
GENRE: Thriller
DESCRIPTION: Minnesota State Patrol investigator takes on the case of his lifetime when a bloody highway shootout leaves behind eight dead bodies—and nearly $300 million in euros. After his last assignment, a disaster that left his partners dead and his career on life support, Cade jumps at the opportunity for redemption, recognizing this will either be his biggest—or his final case.
As Cade gets close to uncovering the money's owner, there's a problem: the owner wants his money back and is willing to do whatever it takes. To slow down Cade's investigation, a catastrophic attack is launched using automatic weapons and a stolen Hummer on the Twin Cities' busiest highway during rush hour by four of the cruelest men to ever crawl into daylight. With Cade and the entire city reeling, international thief Martin Clements is planning to break into Patrol headquarters to steal the money back.
CRITIQUE REQUESTED: everything
CONTACT INFO: Allan Evans (allan at docevans dot com)
WORDCOUNT: 69,000
GENRE: Thriller
DESCRIPTION: Minnesota State Patrol investigator takes on the case of his lifetime when a bloody highway shootout leaves behind eight dead bodies—and nearly $300 million in euros. After his last assignment, a disaster that left his partners dead and his career on life support, Cade jumps at the opportunity for redemption, recognizing this will either be his biggest—or his final case.
As Cade gets close to uncovering the money's owner, there's a problem: the owner wants his money back and is willing to do whatever it takes. To slow down Cade's investigation, a catastrophic attack is launched using automatic weapons and a stolen Hummer on the Twin Cities' busiest highway during rush hour by four of the cruelest men to ever crawl into daylight. With Cade and the entire city reeling, international thief Martin Clements is planning to break into Patrol headquarters to steal the money back.
CRITIQUE REQUESTED: everything
CONTACT INFO: Allan Evans (allan at docevans dot com)
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