Thursday, May 6, 2010

Critique Request- Little Nightmares

TITLE: Little Nightmares

WORD COUNT: 70,000

GENRE: YA Urban Fantasy

DESCRIPTION: This is a story about three paranormal youngins as as they explore a haunted house, and in a general sense about how their lives are affected by their abilities. Query, with a better description, is available at The Public Query Slushpile:

CRITIQUE REQUESTED: Its first draft material so right now, I'm really just wondering what works with the story and what doesn't. Does it hold up? Is it worth trying to draft to something salable? That sort of thing. A general critique I suppose.

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